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The Stephen Spender Prize 2020 for poetry in translation
in association with the Guardian

16-and-under category, commended

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Gabriela O'Keeffe

Tears for America (extract)



A tear for Uncle Sam

Who escaped from rehab

And got drunk on Jack Daniels

in 'Mr Bojangles'.


Nuke Japan

Destroy Pyong Yang

And shower Vietnam

  With


  Napalm.


bombs

bombs

Bombing!

      Iraq

          Yugoslavia


                Afghanistan.



A tear for Coca-Cola

putting his greasy hand

in the back pocket

of our Levi's, saying

"Diet Coke, Sireee!!"

nothing, but

water and aspartame



A tear for Heinz, and for Nike

International traders

crying,"FREEDOM!!" out loud

but their whispers cry,"greed..."


And for a stranger,

the tears

of his brother,

left

with

the worst of two choices

burn

or

jump




from floor 22

you
      jump


An eagle, without wings


f

a

l

l

i

n

   g



to
   ground

             z e r o.

Translated from Irish by Gabriela O'Keeffe



Deora do Mhericeá (extract)


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deoir do UNCLE SAM

d'éalaigh as Rehab

d'ól a raibh de Jack Daniels

i Mr Bojangles

núiceáil an tSeapáin

dhein dúirling de Pyong Yang

chaith



    ceathanna

    neipeam
        ar Vít Neam




bhuam

bhuam

Bombing!

an Iaráic

          Yugoslavia


                           Afghanistan.



deoir do Coca Cola

' cuir a lámh ghréiseach

i bpóca tóna

ár Levi's á rá

DietCokeSiree

gan ann ach uisce &

              aspartame




deoir do Heinz & do Nike

trádálaithe trasdomhanda

' bhéic freedom os ard

i gcogar bhéic SAINT




& a dheoraí na ndeor

a dheartháir

ag a fágadh

rogha an dá dhíogha

loscadh

nó léimt




as urlár 22

léimeann

jump




      t

      ú




      a

      g




      t

      i

      t

      i




      m






go talamh   .z e r o


Michael Davitt

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Translation commentary

These are the final verses of Michael Davitt's poem, 'Tears for America'. This poem is written as a mourning piece, with the poet despairing how America is falling into capitalism and war. I chose this poem because I loved the stark, bleak imagery it invoked and I enjoyed the fragmented nature in which the poem was written, as if the poem itself was crumbling alongside America.

Irish is quite a compact language, which presented a challenge when translating this poem into English. The poet shortens his sentences even more, omitting pronouns and verb conjugations in places. I tried to stay as true as possible to the poet's intentions in my translation, deliberately clipping my sentences to blunt statements (Nuke Japan. Destroy Pyong Yang.) I felt that these shortened sentences were essential to the tone of this poem. The poet does not use flowery language to try and soothe what he is saying, rather he states it quite bluntly.

One phrase that I found quite interesting to translate was, 'dhéin dúirling de'. Translated literally into English this means, 'make a whirlwind of'. I felt that this phrase was too wordy and eloquent among the other blunt sentences the poet had written. I instead translated it to 'destroy', which I felt conveyed the same message in a more upfront and stark manner.

The poet wrote this poem in the aftermath of the 9/11 attacks, and the last stanza of this poem describes the plight of someone trapped inside the Twin Towers. The first sentence of this stanza was quite difficult to translate, as the word, 'deoraí' can mean multiple things in English. I felt that 'stranger' was an apt translation, conveying the unknown and left-behind nature of many of those who have lost someone they loved in a terrorist attack.

Gabriela O'Keeffe